Comments on: Sc57 Berkutchi

By: Zemi

Zemi — Mon, 16 Aug 2010 19:34:23 +0000

I think I like the first version just a little better for the lead up into the rabbit’s danger, but the last two frames of this page make much more since than the last two of the first version. Perhaps adding the bird like you did in the background frame would’ve worked better in the first version, too. Both are nicely done, though.

By: Pat

Pat — Sat, 30 May 2009 02:57:45 +0000

I agree with Fencing Bear

By: Fencing Bear

Fencing Bear — Fri, 29 May 2009 13:38:15 +0000

I don’t think your first page on this was as bad as you’re imagining. I liked the two frame entry into Serik’s dream and the gradual approach of danger to the rabbit. The new page has nice features, too: the last two frames are particularly striking.

By: Pat

Pat — Fri, 29 May 2009 03:50:43 +0000

I understand! thanks.
I think the artwork on both pages are interesting.

By: rocartsc

rocartsc — Thu, 28 May 2009 17:57:49 +0000

Well…it’s more of a dream-flashback.

By: Pat

Pat — Thu, 28 May 2009 00:52:52 +0000

Does this mean Serik is in danger?

By: Rob

Rob — Tue, 26 May 2009 22:53:38 +0000

Kazakhs hunt with eagles? No way. I would never have believed it if I hadn’t seen the video…